One day... There was a little girl name Ava. She LOVED her older brother, Peter. Every day Peter treated Ava like Peter was her dad. Because on reason. Ava was VERY sick. Her Mom And dad didn't care about Ava and Peter.


They thought they were useless. Peter was VERY Hungry. And Ava was too. Peter got two apples. But he did not give one apple to Ava. He gave him Two. Apples to Ava. One day his dad was Visiting. They were scared..


He was a Large man with a long beard. WHERE IS AVA?! Shouted The dad. Peter showed were Ava was. He whispered to Ava's ear. You are hopeless you were a mistake. Ava was coughing so hard! You will just die from sickness. Peter heard. NO SHE WON'T! Shouted Peter. What did you say!? Said the Dad.


He punched and slapped Peter. OW! Said Peter. Ava was frightened! So the dad left. Its okay sis! Said Peter while holding her. Ava was only 5 she was very young. Months pasted by! Ava was so sick she didn't just cough. She coughed out blood.


Peter and Ava and his Rude Mother and Father were poor. They had no money. But just a farm. Soon when they were getting kinda older Ava was 6. And Peter was 10. It was Ava's birthday. But something weird Happened.

Ava forgot something important! She Coughed so much. She didn't know how to breath. Breath Honey! Said Peter. Peter was so upset.

Common! You ain't going die on me! Said Peter. All Peter wanted to do was fly so high and Hold Ava. Ava was up in the sky now. Her dad busted in. When he saw Ava he cried.

WHY ARE YOU CRYING?! Shouted Peter. YOU DID NOT EVEN LOVE HER! I did... Said the Dad. YOU SAID SHE WAS MISTAKE! Plz stop! Said The Dad. NO I WON'T MEAN DAD! Said Peter. I SAID BE QUIET! Shouted The dad. The Dad picked up Ava and put her in the blanket.

And Peter died. But Ava was far. They loved eachother. So much. There love broke.


~Wintersummer~

litrially I am In tears is this true? if it is poor them but if it is not true I am still in tears

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litrially I am In tears is this true? if it is poor them but if it is not true I am still in tears

Actually no. BUT it could of.

I too have a sad story. one day there was a girl named sara she was 9 years old and had a bad cold she had a brother that was 15 his name was josh they were put up for adoption a few years back they were in an adoption center for 3 years now and there still in there. they get fed 1 bread crust each. soon sara got sicker and sicker josh soon got sick aswell they went up to the adoption center worker named clara they said "clara we are sick" clara grabbed a belt and hit josh. sara slapped clara and they ran away from the center and were on the streets,it was winter. they found another boy on the streets all alone he looked to be about 5 they went up to him and asked him if he wanted to walk with them he replied yes sara asked his name he said his name was jake
a few minutes later sara started throwing up projectile vomiting. soon she threw up so much she was dehydrated josh carried her to a hospital the next day she died. josh didn't know what to think. he was so upset he thought about suicide. jake said that he should go and then jake left. josh found a surgery knife and stabbed himself just to be with sara they were like best friends later that year jake died from starvation. now they were together 3 great friends living together forever then the next day josh and saras parents came to get them her biologicaly parents did they had to tell the parents the bad news so they did and the dad mike fainted and then later on a couple years later mike died just before his wife becky was gonna have a baby beck lived alone with her daughter bonnie until bonnie was about 19 then becky died bonnie was all alone. bonnie lived a normal life just without parents. bonnie later died at age 98 with 3 kids. the end






~lulu2

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litrially I am In tears is this true? if it is poor them but if it is not true I am still in tears


Actually no. BUT it could of.

oh so I balled my eyes out for nothing

but still good story did u make this up urself? if u did then AMAZING! its amaze sauce and also sad

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but still good story did u make this up urself? if u did then AMAZING! its amaze sauce and also sad

Yes. I just got the Names from a book.

super duper sad

This story is very touching, no wonder it's called a "sad story" I love it!

Og my gosh! this is such a good story but seriously sad and a bit emotional!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This should be on the arts category

that was not sad at all that was so lame

that is very rude i quite liked it but work on grammar too many sentances that were too short think about resolution other than that terrific story but ignore what i just said coz im 10! except you tankbomber!