26th December 2014
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Just a dream... (Sad story)

Made by Wintersummer in Inventions

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26th December 2014, 07:58 PM

One day a girl name Sarah had a older brother......


His name was Dylan..... They loved each other.

But one day everything changed...

Welcome to the story of so many adventures.... A breath taking story called, Just a dream.. Enjoy.

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Sarah woke up. It was her birthday. She was so happy. Dylan was coming back from the army.

She waited, and waited, and waited, Until he came. She was so happy she hugged him and spent a lot of time with him.

Dylan loved her. I want to talk you to the park. :) It is always peace and quiet. Said Dylan. My favorite place! :o Gasped Sarah. Thats were mommy died. :( Said Sarah.

Dylan ignored sadly. He loved his mom. But when she pasted. Dylan treated Sarah better like a dad.

So they went to the park. :)

There was a drunk driver. It banged into the car Dylan and Sarah were in. Somehow the car hit it so hard they tumbled into this place! But it wasn't a place. It was a lost forest with some trees.


DYLAN ARE YOU OKAY!? Sarah said! Sarah.... I just want you to know... I love yo-.. DYLAN! ARE YOU HERE!? LISTEN TO ME! :'( She said in disbelief.

I MUST BE DREAMING! Its just a DREAM...... Sarah had a flashback. Of Dylan holding her. When Sarah was a baby. But Dylan wasn't there. Her mommy was there too.

But Sarah had to go on. It was for the best. Nights and days and years pasted. Sarah found some food. But not a lot.

Its a dream she kept saying. Hopefully.

Sarah saw a cliff. She held her locket. Goodbye world. She jumped.

That night on the news the news reporter said ''A girl name Sarah Smith died! She jumped off a cliff' Sarah's dad was shocked. Every day he want to The Mom's Grave and Dylan's grave... And Sarah's grave.

Everyday the Dad played this song. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlsbTcPxZPc He was all alone.


~Wintersummer~ -Sarah in her head- ''I died... Its just a drea-........
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26th December 2014, 08:06 PM

I cri evertim i read dis.
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27th December 2014, 09:44 PM

iam fel sori fr ya bruh 😢
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28th December 2014, 09:47 AM

its an amazng story but use more connectives you have to many short sentences
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28th December 2014, 10:34 AM

Good story! But, I do agree is as a VERY sad story.
~Winnie
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28th December 2014, 11:54 AM

Amazing but sad story :(

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