Mom! Can we go? Screamed Mia, ''No! I need a perfect statue!'' Mom! But why these? These ones are creepy! And I feel like there moving!!!!!!, ''NO! Just sit over by the bench!'' Fine mean mom! -.- She sat there. And waited. Ugh. What the heck is wrong with that panda statue. Its stupid! Like this place! Said Mia.


A tall man was there he spoke,''Little girl your not supposed to be sitting on that bench''. WHY! Are you my mom? -_- -.-. NO! So you can't tell me what to do!, ''I'm just doing you a favor theres a very relaxing chair near the back. Follow me.''

WHATEVER! Mia said walking with the man. He grabbed her into a room near the back and chocked her. AHH! She screamed, ''SHUT UP NOW! The man demanded''. Help! Then he got a knife and stabbed her. Whats going on? Where am I? Said Mia,

WHY CAN'T I MOVE, ''Your now a panda statue, The one YOU thought was stupid'' A man spoke, ''Sir is everything okay in there?'' Yeah Boss! Said the man. NO! ''SHUT UP!'' He demanded. Helpp.
M-m-my mommy is out there!

They all left. When it hit night Mia spoke (Panda now) H-h-help I want my mommy. Said Mia. Don't we all? Said a Bear statue. Welcome to Fantage Statue! Where you get the best Statue! Said a Monkey statue. They all laughed but Mia didn't.

Mia suddenly saw a sign, It said, ''Welcome! See your statues perform! Perform? Yes! They will be robots and act real! Sounds strange! But buy one now!''

Mia cried. HELP! HELP ME! What did I do? Help me....

~Wintersummer~

(Btw here is music that made me think credits to FNAF its kinda like it)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iR5pE2qiEZY

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Mom! Can we go? Screamed Mia, ''No! I need a perfect statue!'' Mom! But why these? These ones are creepy! And I feel like there moving!!!!!!, ''NO! Just sit over by the bench!'' Fine mean mom! -.- She sat there. And waited. Ugh. What the heck is wrong with that panda statue. Its stupid! Like this place! Said Mia.


A tall man was there he spoke,''Little girl your not supposed to be sitting on that bench''. WHY! Are you my mom? -_- -.-. NO! So you can't tell me what to do!, ''I'm just doing you a favor theres a very relaxing chair near the back. Follow me.''

WHATEVER! Mia said walking with the man. He grabbed her into a room near the back and chocked her. AHH! She screamed, ''SHUT UP NOW! The man demanded''. Help! Then he got a knife and stabbed her. Whats going on? Where am I? Said Mia,

WHY CAN'T I MOVE, ''Your now a panda statue, The one YOU thought was stupid'' A man spoke, ''Sir is everything okay in there?'' Yeah Boss! Said the man. NO! ''SHUT UP!'' He demanded. Helpp.
M-m-my mommy is out there!

They all left. When it hit night Mia spoke (Panda now) H-h-help I want my mommy. Said Mia. Don't we all? Said a Bear statue. Welcome to Fantage Statue! Where you get the best Statue! Said a Monkey statue. They all laughed but Mia didn't.

Mia suddenly saw a sign, It said, ''Welcome! See your statues perform! Perform? Yes! They will be robots and act real! Sounds strange! But buy one now!''

Mia cried. HELP! HELP ME! What did I do? Help me....

~Wintersummer~

(Btw here is music that made me think credits to FNAF its kinda like it)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iR5pE2qiEZY

Am I the only one who got chills from this? ~Mincraftpage~

i shuddered a bit and i dont get this story i cant quite understand it you might want to put more "" to show its speach and more . ! ? punctuation

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i shuddered a bit and i dont get this story i cant quite understand it you might want to put more "" to show its speach and more . ! ? punctuation

Alright, Sorry about that!!!

~Wintersummer~

This scared me a lot. It is also a lot like FNaF. You could probably be an author.

its alright its learning you have to make mistakes if you want to improve (except ice skating i would like my butt to stay warm and i dont want it to hurt).