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Khrysalis
20th February 2016, 07:39 AM
Lol none of the comments are in relation to the discussion. The comments are its own discussion. Youtube 2.0.
Anyway, this is a cool piece. You're metaphorical skills are rather impressive. Unless this is by someone else, I wouldn't know, I'm uneducated as far as literature goes. Otherwise yeah, you have amazing thinking abilities, especially for a kid. Girls can do that to you to though. This is still rather astute and uplifting. And uhh yeah. Nice work!
Anyway, this is a cool piece. You're metaphorical skills are rather impressive. Unless this is by someone else, I wouldn't know, I'm uneducated as far as literature goes. Otherwise yeah, you have amazing thinking abilities, especially for a kid. Girls can do that to you to though. This is still rather astute and uplifting. And uhh yeah. Nice work!
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Ninjas
21st February 2016, 10:00 AM
xxgurlplayxx wrote on 6th February 2016 10:29 PM:
CueTheRain said on 6th February 2016 07:16 PM:
It had been a while,
since you guys have read a pile,
of junk I want to write,
for all you nice guys to read.
But I have to let it go,
all the feelings I have for you,
you're just a player,
and I got caught under your shoe.
You dance with other girls,
and you held her hand.
You left me here to rot..
just like as you planned.
I have to let it go,
all the feelings inside.
I don't know why I like you,
I don't know why I feel sad when I don't see your face,
I only know one thing that,
I don't bear anything without you.
IF I know what love is... It's because of you...
I loved you.
But let that man go, if he broke your heart.
They're not worth the while, of crying out your tears.
Scratch your guys' initials off of that wooden tree, get rid of that bark.
You're tears shouldn't be wasted....
On that guy who broke you heart.
Let it go.
i don't like this I LOVE THIS +1
It had been a while,
since you guys have read a pile,
of junk I want to write,
for all you nice guys to read.
But I have to let it go,
all the feelings I have for you,
you're just a player,
and I got caught under your shoe.
You dance with other girls,
and you held her hand.
You left me here to rot..
just like as you planned.
I have to let it go,
all the feelings inside.
I don't know why I like you,
I don't know why I feel sad when I don't see your face,
I only know one thing that,
I don't bear anything without you.
IF I know what love is... It's because of you...
I loved you.
But let that man go, if he broke your heart.
They're not worth the while, of crying out your tears.
Scratch your guys' initials off of that wooden tree, get rid of that bark.
You're tears shouldn't be wasted....
On that guy who broke you heart.
Let it go.
i don't like this I LOVE THIS +1
Awwh, thank you! I try! -CueTheRain
Senpai, I want you. Yandere is coming.
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21st February 2016, 10:02 AM
Shyanna wrote on 6th February 2016 11:11 PM:
CueTheRain said on 6th February 2016 07:16 PM:
It had been a while,
since you guys have read a pile,
of junk I want to write,
for all you nice guys to read.
But I have to let it go,
all the feelings I have for you,
you're just a player,
and I got caught under your shoe.
You dance with other girls,
and you held her hand.
You left me here to rot..
just like as you planned.
I have to let it go,
all the feelings inside.
I don't know why I like you,
I don't know why I feel sad when I don't see your face,
I only know one thing that,
I don't bear anything without you.
IF I know what love is... It's because of you...
I loved you.
But let that man go, if he broke your heart.
They're not worth the while, of crying out your tears.
Scratch your guys' initials off of that wooden tree, get rid of that bark.
You're tears shouldn't be wasted....
On that guy who broke you heart.
Let it go.
when i read the title i thought u were gonna sing let it go xd
It had been a while,
since you guys have read a pile,
of junk I want to write,
for all you nice guys to read.
But I have to let it go,
all the feelings I have for you,
you're just a player,
and I got caught under your shoe.
You dance with other girls,
and you held her hand.
You left me here to rot..
just like as you planned.
I have to let it go,
all the feelings inside.
I don't know why I like you,
I don't know why I feel sad when I don't see your face,
I only know one thing that,
I don't bear anything without you.
IF I know what love is... It's because of you...
I loved you.
But let that man go, if he broke your heart.
They're not worth the while, of crying out your tears.
Scratch your guys' initials off of that wooden tree, get rid of that bark.
You're tears shouldn't be wasted....
On that guy who broke you heart.
Let it go.
when i read the title i thought u were gonna sing let it go xd
Well, I am a singer... My second or third year of training. -CueTheRain
Senpai, I want you. Yandere is coming.
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21st February 2016, 10:50 AM
jilly wrote on 7th February 2016 03:14 AM:
Muffinz said on 6th February 2016 07:18 PM:
the cold never bothered me anyway
U GOT IT ALL WRONG ITS LIKE THIS:
the cold never bothered me anyway
U GOT IT ALL WRONG ITS LIKE THIS:
xD
GRAVITY FALLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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