6th March 2016
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I Have Heartburn

Made by CueTheRain in Wisdom

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6th March 2016, 09:28 AM

You let go of her hand,
you then came by me.
You say, "You're sorry,"
then kiss my cheek.
Little did I know...
This was all fantasy.
Since it was dream,
I'll let my actions go free.
I told him that I've loved him,
and I'd never win.
"Win what?" "His heart." I said.
Our love may become a wonderful art.
A piecing so beautiful.. That was thrown away.
I told him my biggest mistake wasn't falling for you, it was thinking that you've fallen too.
Now I just sit and wait, for a day...
The day when I actually go up to you.
The day we fall in love, but for now...
I'm a girl with a broken heart.
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6th March 2016, 09:32 AM

My, Oh my, this is the most beautiful poem I've ever read! you must do more!
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Strong Blood
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6th March 2016, 09:37 AM

CueTheRain wrote on 6th March 2016 09:28 AM:
You let go of her hand,
you then came by me.
You say, "You're sorry,"
then kiss my cheek.
Little did I know...
This was all fantasy.
Since it was dream,
I'll let my actions go free.
I told him that I've loved him,
and I'd never win.
"Win what?" "His heart." I said.
Our love may become a wonderful art.
A piecing so beautiful.. That was thrown away.
I told him my biggest mistake wasn't falling for you, it was thinking that you've fallen too.
Now I just sit and wait, for a day...
The day when I actually go up to you.
The day we fall in love, but for now...
I'm a girl with a broken heart.


Nice Poem.
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+1 by Buddy25

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6th March 2016, 09:47 AM

CueTheRain wrote on 6th March 2016 09:28 AM:
You let go of her hand,
you then came by me.
You say, "You're sorry,"
then kiss my cheek.
Little did I know...
This was all fantasy.
Since it was dream,
I'll let my actions go free.
I told him that I've loved him,
and I'd never win.
"Win what?" "His heart." I said.
Our love may become a wonderful art.
A piecing so beautiful.. That was thrown away.
I told him my biggest mistake wasn't falling for you, it was thinking that you've fallen too.
Now I just sit and wait, for a day...
The day when I actually go up to you.
The day we fall in love, but for now...
I'm a girl with a broken heart.
I thought you were serious about the title. I was gonna tell you to call a firefighter to extinguish the heartburn.
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6th March 2016, 09:49 AM

DopeSir wrote on 6th March 2016 09:32 AM:
My, Oh my, this is the most beautiful poem I've ever read! you must do more!
I'll do so. :3
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+1 by Buddy25

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6th March 2016, 09:50 AM

SophieJasper wrote on 6th March 2016 09:37 AM:
CueTheRain said on 6th March 2016 09:28 AM:
You let go of her hand,
you then came by me.
You say, "You're sorry,"
then kiss my cheek.
Little did I know...
This was all fantasy.
Since it was dream,
I'll let my actions go free.
I told him that I've loved him,
and I'd never win.
"Win what?" "His heart." I said.
Our love may become a wonderful art.
A piecing so beautiful.. That was thrown away.
I told him my biggest mistake wasn't falling for you, it was thinking that you've fallen too.
Now I just sit and wait, for a day...
The day when I actually go up to you.
The day we fall in love, but for now...
I'm a girl with a broken heart.



Nice Poem.
Thank you~
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+1 by Buddy25

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6th March 2016, 09:51 AM

Tom Lee wrote on 6th March 2016 09:47 AM:
CueTheRain said on 6th March 2016 09:28 AM:
You let go of her hand,
you then came by me.
You say, "You're sorry,"
then kiss my cheek.
Little did I know...
This was all fantasy.
Since it was dream,
I'll let my actions go free.
I told him that I've loved him,
and I'd never win.
"Win what?" "His heart." I said.
Our love may become a wonderful art.
A piecing so beautiful.. That was thrown away.
I told him my biggest mistake wasn't falling for you, it was thinking that you've fallen too.
Now I just sit and wait, for a day...
The day when I actually go up to you.
The day we fall in love, but for now...
I'm a girl with a broken heart.

I thought you were serious about the title. I was gonna tell you to call a firefighter to extinguish the heartburn.
Oh my xD
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+1 by Buddy25

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6th March 2016, 09:51 AM

CueTheRain wrote on 6th March 2016 09:50 AM:
SophieJasper said on 6th March 2016 09:37 AM:
CueTheRain said on 6th March 2016 09:28 AM:
You let go of her hand,
you then came by me.
You say, "You're sorry,"
then kiss my cheek.
Little did I know...
This was all fantasy.
Since it was dream,
I'll let my actions go free.
I told him that I've loved him,
and I'd never win.
"Win what?" "His heart." I said.
Our love may become a wonderful art.
A piecing so beautiful.. That was thrown away.
I told him my biggest mistake wasn't falling for you, it was thinking that you've fallen too.
Now I just sit and wait, for a day...
The day when I actually go up to you.
The day we fall in love, but for now...
I'm a girl with a broken heart.



Nice Poem.

Thank you~

Welcome :P
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How deep is your love?
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6th March 2016, 10:05 AM

Amazing! It is lovely!
Please do more

~Becky
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+1 by Buddy25

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6th March 2016, 10:54 AM

Mystic Kacket wrote on 6th March 2016 10:05 AM:
Amazing! It is lovely!
Please do more

~Becky
I will!
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+1 by Buddy25

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6th March 2016, 11:00 AM

Yeah hope to see theese posts
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6th March 2016, 04:28 PM

Great poem! You need to do more, so i can read the beauty of them.
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6th March 2016, 06:04 PM

isnt heartburn like, when you have the feeling of almost throwing up tho
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6th March 2016, 07:00 PM

sparklz wrote on 6th March 2016 06:04 PM:
isnt heartburn like, when you have the feeling of almost throwing up tho

heartburn:
poem by frozo

my esophagus; it burns,
as i wonder when the feeling of 'normal' will return.

i cannot breathe,
my heart, it seeths.

baking soda mixed with warm water
will help slaughter...

...the pain of heartburn away.


why associate the word 'heartburn' with some kind of romance like heartburn is when you get a burning feeling in your chest and need to drink baking soda
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so long, goodbye, and good luck.

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6th March 2016, 07:36 PM

Beautiful! I hope to see more. I now consider you one of the Legendary Poets of the DSGHQ! *opera voices* ALL HAIL POET GOD! ~Kat
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