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Kacket
13th January 2014, 06:29 PM
Hello, here is chapter one if you missed it. http://forums.damenspike.com/view/9045-/
in this chapter I will talk about the voyage and reaching the new isles I hope you like this one.
Chapter 2- The Migration to the new world.
~ As we walked along the new isles we continued wondering why we could not see each other without knowing we continued to chat among each other we enjoyed chatting the isles was limited of many islands even though many islands we did not know about the area was so big it was a vast area we soon after continued to chat later on this guy shining with fame came down among us he took out his sword and slashed the bug which caused the lag and of course us not seeing each other this guy was Damen he soon after rebooted the isles causing everything to be a ok we continued walking around now it was easier to walk around we stared in amazement wondering how he fixed such a big problem he later on banished we continued looking around the new world it was full of trees and things we later on set up camp we played and talked the best part is no one controlled us there was no life only the game later on it became darker night was falling we logged off some did not many did to fall asleep. Now we would set sail to venture the vast area and we found new things including these things called clubs they where fun to join. Now we are all sleeping waiting for morning to come... we then woke up and we started a new day...
(Guess what happens next in the next chapter we will continue walking around but we will soon after find things) Tell me what you thought of this chapter was it good,bad,ok, or eh it was alright.
Best Wishes.
~Sadie
in this chapter I will talk about the voyage and reaching the new isles I hope you like this one.
Chapter 2- The Migration to the new world.
~ As we walked along the new isles we continued wondering why we could not see each other without knowing we continued to chat among each other we enjoyed chatting the isles was limited of many islands even though many islands we did not know about the area was so big it was a vast area we soon after continued to chat later on this guy shining with fame came down among us he took out his sword and slashed the bug which caused the lag and of course us not seeing each other this guy was Damen he soon after rebooted the isles causing everything to be a ok we continued walking around now it was easier to walk around we stared in amazement wondering how he fixed such a big problem he later on banished we continued looking around the new world it was full of trees and things we later on set up camp we played and talked the best part is no one controlled us there was no life only the game later on it became darker night was falling we logged off some did not many did to fall asleep. Now we would set sail to venture the vast area and we found new things including these things called clubs they where fun to join. Now we are all sleeping waiting for morning to come... we then woke up and we started a new day...
(Guess what happens next in the next chapter we will continue walking around but we will soon after find things) Tell me what you thought of this chapter was it good,bad,ok, or eh it was alright.
Best Wishes.
~Sadie
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Stags
13th January 2014, 07:04 PM
I love it, and it is a very unique Story so far! It shows how we had to lose our OldCp, and we had to travel to a new land (15 Betas). We set out on the Mainland, and we play around. It is amazing how it is like no other story, where we are game players, but nobody controls us, and we live in these "Safari" worlds that are actually Penguin Isles as you said. I love the part when Damen fixes a glitch, and it is on the land, but it still shows it as a game. Good luck!
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Freehawk
15th January 2014, 10:24 PM
Great 2nd part! It is unique because you are describing what the thoughts of the penguins were +1!
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