Sophie said on 1st May 2015 09:16 PM:
Hi.

So, a couple someones (*cough* tasha and allie *cough*) thought I should post my English narrative on here, which I am honestly very proud of. This is just the first page, and it's completely unedited, so sorry about that. So, here it is. Oh and the italics is like a narration clip of present day Jaycee Lee, the main character. Normal text is the past, aka the entire story that's told.

You never know how much life means to you, until you're on the brink of losing it. Most people think my life is a dream come true. A living fairytale. At least, that's what I had lead them to believe the first 5 years of my Youtube career. I happen to be a Youtuber. I make a living off of my online videos I post. I gotta admit, it's pretty cool, and way better than becoming a doctor or lawyer or something like that. Apparently, over 3 million people love my videos so much that they subscribed to my channel. That was cool too. What wasn't cool is the real story behind me. It's full of depression, sadness, and loneliness. I had wanted to die. At least that's what I thought. That was quite an adventure and that's what I'm here to tell you about. This is the story of myself, Jaycee Lee and my striped arms.

Jaycee's POV:

"Hey Internet. So today, I'm joined by the magnificent Tessa Delraeta (i swear it's not a rae pun, rae just sounded cool, but i needed a last name, so alas delraeta was born) and we're going to be doing a dare-off," I say to the camera and do a dramatic pause and continue, "So, I promised y'all a video and asked on your input and this was the most demanded. Then, we took your tweets of dares that you tweeted to us and are going to do them." Tessa adds in, "I'm probably going to regret 95 percent of this video, but oh well. Let's do this!" Two hours, 5 "why did we agree to this"'s, and 10 dares later, we finally finished the video, and I head into my room to start editing.

I plop myself in my desk chair and open Sony Vegas. An hour or so later, I finish editing the video and upload the video. I tell Tessa that it's uploaded and get out my phone to tweet the video. I wait a few minutes, then start looking through the comments. I smile at a few of them, smirk at someone's pun, but then see it. I don't know if this person is male or female. I just call the person It. This time, It said, "You're so stupid and ugly. Go jump off a bridge already. Burn in Hell, devil. Your kind is a sin to this world." I feel tears well up in my eyes, but I swallow the lump in my throat and fight back the tears. I continue scrolling down the comments. The majority of the comments are good, but some of the comments are bad. They're mostly against my seuxality. I've grown used to those people. Somewhat. I close my laptop and fall back onto my bed. I pull out my phone and headphones, switch my music over to Fall Out Boy's album American Beauty American Psycho, and lay there staring at the ceiling.

Well, that's a little introduction. You're quite confused still on who I am. Let me explain. My name is Jaycee Lee. Most people just call me Jay or say my first and last name together so it sounds like Jayceelee. Anyway, I am 20 years old. I moved into an apartment in London with my best friend and fellow Youtuber, Tessa Delraeta. She's 20 as well. She's pretty chill. I'mc urrently going to Uni (university/college) for a degree in Cinematic Arts. My current profession is a full time job as a Youtuber. I have 3 million fabulous people subscribed to me, and I love them all so much. Now, to the negative part. Quite a few people (mainly Christians that think my sexuality is a sin (but some Christians are chill)) hate on me. I'm bisexual, and sadly, many people frown upon me for it. In the past, I couldn't handle it. That's the reason this entire story happens. Now, I've grown used to it. Now that introductions are done, let's get back to the story.

There's the first page of it. This is honestly terrifying sharing it with y'all. My palms are literally sweating right now. And my hands ache bc I had to type that all out instead of copy pasting it. So yeah, next part coming soon, when I get unlazy.

As a Christian who just got first communion yesterday I am quite affended

the single moms, the poor moms, the rich moms, the happily married moms, the divorced moms, and even to the people who may not have a mom.

Yeah well you can be lying. And plus gold, on a game, turned into money IRL??

Its good. I could see this being an actual book. Just dont use conjunctions in the beginning of your sentences and make sure that the numbers are spelled out.

thats really short for one page