PinkHearts wrote on 17th February 2015 08:58 PM:

This was a wonderful application, but I strongly suggest adding more detail, using better grammar, and becoming more trusted. Other than that, I think you did a great job! Keep trying for knight and don't give up just yet, because I know you can make it .

Thank you you all have nice comments,i will try to become a member soon.

Hi
I am making an application to be a knight.I have been on oldcp since august 22 2014.
I can be trusted.I haven't been on for so long because we moved to the UK.BTW mods know me,i am elly911.i have experience i have seen the blackhawks strike,i've met rover and the hound.
I am 11 years old now.i hope i can become a knight!

hi im not really new anymore

Hi,I made a disscussion! Its Elly911